PART 2 - CONCEPTION
To say
that I was disappointed when Pocket Books rejected my awesome new Star Trek
story would be an understatement. Ten years of work had been utterly
trivialized and discarded, allegedly without even being read first. My two best
friends in the world had read it and loved it. I knew that at least one of them
had given me the completely objective opinion that I had asked for because he
had thoroughly dissected an earlier draft and pointed out several flaws that I,
being so close to it, had missed. A third friend who lived a few townhouses
down from mine had read it and loved it. My younger brother had read it and…and
had asked me why I put my story in the Star Trek universe. He had liked it as
well, but in his inherently subjective but purportedly objective opinion, the story
was bursting at the seams with potential and the Star Trek universe was only
holding it back.
I
thought a lot about my brother’s opinion. I thought about the fact that throughout
the entire process of writing my story in the Star Trek universe, I had written
dozens if not hundreds of notes about ideas that I’d had for my story that
simply could not work in the Star Trek universe. I thought about how much I
would really hate to throw away ten years’ worth of work. After I did all of
that thinking, however, I decided to start over. I would remove the Star Trek elements
and rewrite my story, putting it in a future Earth universe of my own creation.
I would incorporate all those ideas I'd had that would not fit into Star Trek.
Starfleet would become Solfleet, named for our sun. Earth would not be the Utopian world that Gene
Roddenberry had made it. The Federation would become the Coalition and would
not be founded by or centered on Earth.
I
contacted my brother and told him what I planned to do. He told me that he was
glad to hear it, and then asked me if I might have any use for a character whom he
had created for one of his own projects, but who had not worked out as he had
hoped. He explained that he had tried later to use that character in one or two
other projects as well, but that the character had simply refused to fit in
anywhere to a satisfactory degree. I asked my brother to describe the character
to me. He did, and I told him that I might indeed have a role for him. In a
manner of speaking, I then gave the character an audition. Admiral Icarus
Hansen lived.
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